Love, that was great! i loved it. the wording was brilliant and the story is enchanting. i wish i could write like this. i keep hoping that reading other people's work will restore me to my former glory, but i think its gone for good. its a shame, i had one thing i was mildly good at and now i have nothing...figures. well, as i said, its a wonderful poem.

Brad

Wow this is an amazing poem
its amazing to be able to have that structure to a poem and keep rhythm,
amazing peice
5/5
=]
lovelove
Alice
xxx
&&thanks for your comment it helped me too smile =] ty xxx