Um....... wow that was a deep poem it certainly expressed a ot of emotioms I just hope that you are okay. Cutting doesn't really help anything I'll tell you that. Don't forget dreams do come true
god bless
Renee

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well love yoou are perfect to me and yoou always will be. yoou have no idea lol :]
i love yoou very muchly

Oohh i love the last two lines.
i love the whole thing, actually. so sad...i'm sorry you feel this way.
ah, and the comment you made on one of my poems, the one about the "racially-mixed relationship": i don't even know how to tell my parents i like him. i'm afraid they'll be disapointed in me. and, this boy, he doesn't exactly KNOW that i like him, and i'm not exactly sure if he likes me...but i still dream about it, ya know?
well thanks for the comment and amazing work.
5/5
Lauren

Beileve in your self and he will notice you!!!!!!!!! but remember babe hes not worth any cut!!!!!!!
fairygirl
xxxx

Very sad poem and very good poem. Alot of feeling. Please don't cut yourself if you do....the last 2 lines were the best. 5/5 definitly

Loved this poem.
i know how that feels.
but oh well.
good poem hun.
keep.it.up
xxo