Aww its sweet. great job again great flow of words.

Another great poem jason i really like your work. You really are good with saying feelings. the words you use show much thought well done 5/5

Take care
Alex xxx

So beautifly done love caire xxx

I meant claire lol

Sounds like someone is in love. This is a great poem. I like how you put everything together. It just seems so perfect. You are a very good writer. Ive looked at all your other poems as well and have like them alot to. Keep up the good writing.
<3
Jennifer