That's a pretty good poem right there.

Beautiful.. i love ur rhyme scheme.. nice words.. i love how u developed this.. i especially love ur last stanza.. and ur title was reli eye-capturing.. just one suggestion, tho.. maybe ud like to add "someday" to ur last line as in:

"maybe, someday, perhaps"

just for the flow.. ur poem, ur rules..
its gr8
keep going
take care
NannO

Hey darl which 0ne 0f u wr0te this p0em. very p0werful and t0uchng piece. g0od use 0f w0rds. keep em c0ming. h0pe use r d0in g0od!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Aaawwww thats very good written, well acually my sister is in the same position as you :) i knw how hard it is, knowin that he is with her and you cant stand that.

Very good written, keep it up