Aww this is saddd =[ Theres a mistake in the first line, you have; "The live we live is so unjust" I think it should be; "The life we live is so unjust" =]

But Marrrrk =[ I hope you're not really feeling like this right now. Anywho, Cheer up! 5/5

`natalie xx

Hey stranger..sumhow i can relate to this poem, nicely written 5/5

V.v I love -you-

Hey! Awesome poem! I understand! Everyone goes through different things and we all hurt sometimes! I loved this poem cuz I can relat!
*Just Lisa*

You can really feel the pain and emotion in this one! good work!

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To feel like shit, to feel so down,
All those times.. we need to frown.
Feeling so bad, with no one to care,
While people hate you.. and you're not aware.
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great poem... ^ favorite stanza! 5/5