Wow, batman, this is coolio! Its deep

Omg thats funkey monkey hun
well done i like it
lol
xoxoroxyxoox

That was excellent! well written! :D

I like this poem its cute

I liked it it short but it also shows exitment

The poem is well written, with a small rhyme, or as I call it "white rhyme".

Just wandering, shouldn't it be "Too much to offer"?

Short but sweet

Hey i love this poem it is so awsome. it sounds like it came from your heart. keep it up. : )

Hey!
This poem is short but sweet.
Very well written
There was a some rhyme in it.
And i loved it!! 5/5

Keep writing!

TORM