Comments : To Much To Offer

  • 17 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    Wow, batman, this is coolio! Its deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg thats funkey monkey hun
    well done i like it
    lol
    xoxoroxyxoox

  • 17 years ago

    by Hide the bong Jesus is coming

    That was excellent! well written! :D

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Cassie aka mexican~

    I like this poem its cute

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Foster

    I liked it it short but it also shows exitment

  • 17 years ago

    by WriterX

    The poem is well written, with a small rhyme, or as I call it "white rhyme".

    Just wandering, shouldn't it be "Too much to offer"?

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Short but sweet

  • 17 years ago

    by Odd

    Hey i love this poem it is so awsome. it sounds like it came from your heart. keep it up. : )

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    This poem is short but sweet.
    Very well written
    There was a some rhyme in it.
    And i loved it!! 5/5

    Keep writing!

    TORM