This is a wonderful poem. I liked the style very much.

Hey, this is good..i liked it...makes me think...great job..keep it up, take er easy..cool perspective on it
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow.. that was very powerful and intense! i just wanted to thank you for the honest coment you gave me! you are one of my favourite people to get comments from because you always tell me the truth and if you dont like something you will tell me! so thnx so much, because i know this really helps me improve! anyway, back to the poem..loL! this was my favourite line, it was so imaginative, i l.o.v.e.d it!

Stained with raindrops, tears glued to skin.

keep up the excellent writing! xox

Omg. I can't believe I hadn't commented this before. Wow.

This was really good, Kaylee. I'm stunned right now. Alot of people write about feeling like a rag doll, and usually they all sound the same, but this poem, wow. It's great, and really different. Loved it! Great job! 5/5

Natalie``