Wow...thats really sad,i hope things start going better for you,the poem is good though,alot of heart was put in it,good job

Hey this speaks to me my sister went though this same thing and i was too little all i could do is stand by and wach as he would have his way with her and if i ever stoped to help id be flung across the room in pain i soon grew use to.

Thanks for all the comments. and this is a true story.

Shes got scars on her body, but more on her heart,
She plasters on a smile, so she wont fall apart.

Those lines are soo good! i love them.
this is such a great poem, very powerful.
nice work, take care,
xoxo
(p.s. thanks for ur comment on my poem!!)

I really love this poem! the lines and the words you chose were amazing! great job! i love the great emotion and the flow was amazing 5/5 your a great poet :D
love,
steph
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S-it! thats so sad!!! its like a flash back of me its like a reflection of me!!
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