Good definitly worth reading really enjoyed it ;]

Wow, I remember this, This was such a great collab if I must say(even though it was a contest) I absoulutly love the way it came out.

Peace, Joe

Wow.. that was amazing, i think iv read it before, but it even took my breath away a second time! wow! keep up the awesome work! 5/5

Wow. This was really good. You all did a great job on this. It was sweet aswell. I really liked this stanza:
"As I ran my thumb across your lips
Your eyes sparkling like the northern star
I closed my eyes kissing you softly
Promising you that I'd never be far"
It stood out the most to me. Awesome poem =] 5/5

`Taleee xx