Great peice. though the last line could do with some work, just doesnot fit the remained propally. other than that though it's a very well written and well expressed peice

"The Darkness is closer to me than the light"

Amazing..This last line is great..I'm very impressed with your poetry, and thank you for the comment..5/5

Very good, I can relate to it. You may want to go back and edit your poem for missing words like the last sentence. Keep it up!

Thanks for your comment

I loved the last line!
way to end the poem strong
yeaaaaaaaa-a

I like this poem, I can totally relate to it. Keep writing. Good job.