Comments : The Loner

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is amazing...i dont think that i could handle that many ppl doing that to me either...very good perspective...i like the lesson..keep it up
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    KENSHIN! WOW

    They say that the worst feeling one may experience,
    Is when you lose something you truly treasure,
    But to be all alone with no one to care for you,
    That is a pain that does not reside in this world.
    ^^^ I was already sucked in by this part right here! Uhhh what a powerful stanza I just loved it!! It's so sad how many people out there really are alone and start getting a little depressed and "different" and instead of sympathy for that we all bring them down and stare at them..its wrong
    Great write it was a pleasure to read!
    CHels

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Very well written, and really something to seriously think about ~ great job!

    Connie