When you feel lonely
and your seeing things dim
Just look around, i'll have a hand to lend
because all you need now
is a friend :)

i love your stuff its awesome!!

Cast this grim shadow of mine away,
When will the sun shine on me?

i love those lines... you are a talented poet. good work, mate.

I love that u show passion in these poems
love claire xxx

An excellent poem, Jason. Very emotive and atmospheric. Well done.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen-

Well i thought it was very good a lil different from the ones i read but hey i liked it just the sam keep up the awsome work!

Very good, there's not much (if anything) that I would change to it.