Dude...thats really great! i can relate to it completely too!! keep up the good work!
-Gabbs

Your words are the truth to so many of us

Hey! thanks for your comment. Very nice poem, I liked the stanza, it was a very good write, the only comment I could make is maybe switching some lines so they follow an order, but they were all great lines! you have a talent, keep writing.

I like this one, you write very well too. I like the way you tell it how it is, you explain things and when you explain it in your writing you can tell how real it is.

I can defininitely relate to you... I know exactly how it feels. you are also a very good writer, and have a lot of talent! Keep up the good writing!

I can defininitely relate to you... I know exactly how it feels. you are also a very good writer, and have a lot of talent! Keep up the good writing!

Hey i can really relate o this poem i love it i no how you feel, thanks so much for the comment on my poem maybe u could hav a look at my other stuff thanks

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I really like this poem it is the way i once felt. i like to right lots of songs on this subject as you might be able to tell my poems are in song form.

You began vaguely passionate, and ended with a hardcore blow to the heart. your emotions flow so perfectly through your writing, i can feel it. this poem was strong, i liked it.

I absoloutly love all your poems!!! they are all so good!! but i think out of them all i love this one the best because i think that i can relate to this one the most.. Keep on writting poems and quotes and i will add you to my favourites and keep on coming back to see your new work.

I like this poem alot! im not sure if thats how u really feel but if it is im srry i use to feel that way all the time...it gets better...kinda keep writing u have a lot of talent ur a great writer