I like it, its so sweet!

WOW i like this poem lol i just met you in the chat room

Awww thats sooo sweet! check out some of mine please. 5/5

This poem is so sweet, but in all honesty...i don't think the eding as any sense of closure, like, after the last line, you could put something like..."and i know, she is all i need in this world." you don't have to use tht, but if you added just somehing to end it, it would be way better that it already is. but i think it is a really lovely poem. good job!
xo~crissy