I don't know why but this poem struck me as being quite funny, whether that is how you intended it or not...I don't know, but more than anything I think it was the way that the cynicism, the sarcasm really came across. The last stanza was definately my favourite;
"I wouldn't fight for peace
A contradiction is unfurled
Death is my sole release
Oh how I love this stupid world!"
Superb write, 5/5 x

From the start you were against this world and lies in believes then you ended your poem by saying how u do love this world. here the irony did a good job. this poem was very good

all the best

Since you won second place in my contest with this, I guess you know what I think about it.

Wow.. very good! it kind of confuses me a bit, but i lik it.. it has a nice flow..keep up the great work!
jessy

Lol, I liked the opening line, I thought it was quite funny. However, the poem was more serious, so it kind of killed it. Maybe use another word, besides 'stupid'? Hmm, other than that, it was great.

Lol, I liked the opening line, I thought it was quite funny. However, the poem was more serious, so it kind of killed it. Maybe use another word, besides 'stupid'? Hmm, other than that, it was great.

Very nice poem. I can't pick a favorite part, Cause I really like all of them. Mainly the middle 4 stanza's.

I thought this poem was different to most poems. It's very original!

I don't think there's much else to say. I wouldn't change anything at all. Keep it up! =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Great poem, unique and flows wonderfully!!
the last stanza is my fav.
~~Sweetie

Great poem, I really liked it! It is very unique and different and flowed pretty well!

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses and love
-thanks-
ann

Wow nice poem, 5/5

Lol i like the ending:) gr8 poem, i can relate. amazing work...i loved your vocabulary, it really fit well and made the poem great! 5/5