Very nicely penned poem, loved it

all the best and take care
5/5

Good poem as always, how are you? E-mail me sometime you know my adress hope to hear from you

bye Cody

I like yourthe use of repetition in this poem short but effective
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Nice work. i really like this. it really involves the reader, and has a clear ending.

well done and thanks for the comment.

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