That was a good story i didnt understand all of it but its all good! i jus want to kno how u came up with that story. im thinking bout writing a story in poem for but im not sure if i am or not. its all good!
~*~ not loved ~*~

I really liked it, it is quite interesting. The questions that hunt us perhaps will never be answered and I like that mystery that you put into the story. I have been writing a story similar to this one.