This is ubelievably amazing. i can relate to every bit of it... you're a really great writer..

xoxo,
chelsea*

Awww:( wonderful poem. wow ur really going through some tough times, just remember ur great for who u r not who someone wants u to be

Awww:( wonderful poem. wow ur really going through some tough times, just remember ur great for who u r not who someone wants u to be

Good poem! The message is great, even though it's a really sad poem--- I hope you find your dad's approval soon----Great write

5/5

I LOVED THIS ONE!!!!!! it sounds so much like me and my family issues at the minuet....

great writting...

october xx

Wow...this is really good...i loved how much emotion you put into it...5/5...stay strong...
~*~lisa~*~

Wow. I know what you mean. Great job! I like your tell-it-like-it-is style. Keep it up. If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to pm me.

Wow this was great...i can relate to it. i love it
good job

I freaking love it

Same here. I know how you feel with people not fully excepting who you are. Great job with one. Loved it! 5/5
Keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

I love how you did freestyle on this and how you just made it into what you felt without bothering with rhymes. I felt a lot of emotion, some anger at the least. My only suggestion is that you make the verses all the same length so that the notation fits. But other than that this is great!

This poem made me sad. It hurts whenever you can't get your parent's approval about that stuff. I went through that, too, at one time. We finally got along better once we talked about things.

This poem is really good. It really deserves a 5/5 and that is what I am going to give you.

This is my favorite stanza:

What does it take?
to get your approval?
should i dress like you,
think like you
be like you?

Excellent job.
>black&&blue

Awh this is really sad. i gave it a 4 because there is not much rhyming in it and i love poems that rhyme but it is still an amazing poem!

I love the way your poem ended, the last verse rocked and made the poem. well done.

much love and many kisses,
bex