Wow this is beautiful. i hate ana but i love her at the same time. she makes me physically weaker but strong ya know? keep writing you have lots of talent!

I dunno, borderline 4/5 but I gave you the 5 cause the emotion you could feel. A few spelling errors and just sentences that didnt make sense. Like

Fusses and thighs over my fat thighs

I dont really know if you can use "thighs" as an action, but it makes the reader stop and make sure they didnt read sme thing wrong. But alas still about a 5, probably near a 4.5 or 4.7 But it'll get there.

YOurs Truly
Bryce