Wow. amazing. this should be the winner of the contest you're entering...
and, wow, thank you so much for your comments! i'm glad you like my work! and you are very talented yourself...
5/5
oh, and you're in my fav's, too. =]
Lauren

Wow, really great poem, 5/5, keep up the good work :)
~*~Yours-Truly~*~

Wow, really great poem, 5/5, keep up the good work :)
~*~Yours-Truly~*~

Heyy thnx for my comments... your an amazing writer. i absolutely love this poem... 5/5

Hey thanks so much for commenting and rating my poem.. you're a great author-- I like this poem!! 5/5

I love this poem , your a great writer
keep it up!

Dreat poem, great emotion I luv it - ur realli great - keep on writing