That was really beautiful. I really liked some of your comparisons("like tears in the rain"), and I really liked the style. This poem really shows that you dont need to have a rhyme scheme to sound great. Good Job!

Wow.
this is amazing! this stanza was my absolute favorite (though all were beautiful)
"What's done is done, its history,
You can never take it back.
I can't ever say you were a mistake.
You were an exception and thats a fact."
just amazing..i wish i could rate higher than a 5
Lauren

Wow! amazing.. that was so great! i really liked some of the comparisons you made and how it flowed so well! keep it up!

Very well written this piece had a great flow and read really well, I find it very hard to write a piece with no rymning scheme and yet maintain a good rythmn you have managed this nicely along with some incredible imagry thanx for the great read.
Tim