Interesting, a very thought out poem, the structure really planned out. ^^ I enjoyed reading, cant wait to see more ~

Deepness-icity, i like it and agree stongly.

That is good i like it....

Wow...makes you think,,another great poem 5/5
XOx Laura Marie aka Sweets
keep up the great work!

Hi GREAT poems i loved them!!

Its really interesting the theme the subject and the unique style of the poem i like it thanks for sharing it wit me

I really enjoyed this poem its really good!! :)

Beautiful poem... i never wrote a poem to God...its a shame... this is a very inspiring and eye opening poem... wow... the devil can really be behind alot of things that we find fun... i never really thought about that...hmm nice
keep up the good work
ur fan

Wow this is very meaningful. and lol i got it to work