This is a really good poem
the repitition of "I see no reason i see no rhyme" emphasises ure thorts and feelings

LUV LJ

Pretty good
just check ya spelling and puntuation
different...

Awww OMFG that was like really really good. I loved it!! Keep writing!!

~♥~Elisha~♥~

Wow i love this poem... its strong... and from the heart!!

I like it..i rly do this is good..teh flow and rhyme is niice. Keep it up.

Lissa xoxox

Wow this is really good Elmo.