An interesting theme to discuss. How connected are we on the phone or online. The format was a bit foreign to me: a chorus sort-of thing between each stanza. All in all, very nice

Wow this is really good. It is so beautifully written & it flowed so well.. My favorite lines were:
Touchtone can you feel me?
Touch my heart and heal me?
Really great job on this. I wish I knew a better word to describe it..it was just amazing. Great job! 5/5**

Wow. this is an unique topic, but you made it eye-catching. and it's weird how you can discuss your feelings online so freely, but often have a hard time speaking them aloud.
but amazing, deserves much higher than a 5.
Lauren

Lol, interesting poem. Don't see alot of poems like this one. Keep it up

*please r/c day dreamer

Brilliant!!! unique yet beautiful penned, awesome! have a great weekend myfriend, take care.

Wow, that was good.. its an interesting topic and was written excellently! keep up the amazing work! 5/5
jessy

A very odd topic to write a poem about, but it was definitely different and creative.

A unique write. Loved the message and the repetition ... those lines were fantastic.

Indeed its a unique poem. Very well written with a loud and clear message. Great work!

I can chat with a member online
And discuss my problems just fine
While my wife is busy watching T.V.
Time is wasting as if it were free.

this pehragraph is really funy
while my wife is busy watching t.v.

nice peom on communication.

Another really great piece. Loved how you repeated those few lines. Made it alot stronger and powerfull. And it was a great topic to write about also. Your poems are amazing. Theres not a thing I can say bad about them. Love them! 5/5

`taleee

I really like your style of writing and it is a very inspired subject! I especially like the repeating phrase it worked very well.
Aaron (remo)

Well done, nice imagery on the touchtone. And thx for defending my country song! Good writing - DM