Awww.. very sweet! i couldnt even tell it had been written by different ppl until i got to the end! hehe.. :) keep up the great work and nice idea!
jessy
btw, i love your name! :P itz so cute!!

Last stanza should be "lovers" and not "lover's".

Awesome work, though, I really like this collaboration! I wish I'd been involved! Great stuff :)

Awwwww I just adore love poems =] great job 5/5