Wow...
this is so beautiful! and so sad...
i am so sorry you feel this way.
amazing poem
5/5
Lauren

Simple and absolutely flawless in what you wanted to get out. I never heard of anyone dying of it, but it's true. People are taking for granted and they can feel used when relationships and friendships crumble and fade. Sometimes it's circumstantial, and sometime's it's something someone did, and sometimes it's reckless and never fair. Anyway, that was a mess i wrote there haha. Keep on writing.

-colin,//

Ur poem blew me away

Wow that poem was amazing!!!!...i can only hope to be that great of a writer..5/5....comment back!

Wow..at least u have the gutz to admitt something that painful...ur not alone tho...nd i really love this poem...i like it how u express the pain u feel everyday nd how no one cares..u r very talented...keep up the gud work

Aww this is such a sad poem but so well writen <33