Great poem. I understand it completly. I really hope you feel better soon...oh and i know this is random but i love all your quotes and your in my faves because of them and I vote 5s for all of them...well good poem...

Simply beautiful poem, though short but well expressive emotion, have a great weekend, take care.

Datz so cutee.. very good emotion and excellently written! keep up the good work!
jessy

Wow, this one had so much of sadness in it and i really liked the way u potrayed it, so short and yet so deep.
great write
all the best and take care
5/5

Gurl, this is beautiful! i really like it! its definetally a 5/5! :)
and i was reading ur profile, and i'm sry that u n ur boi broke up, i kno how that is cuz my boi just broke up wit me! its so difficult--so i kin relate to u!
o yea, and thnx for commenting me!

Yet another awesome poem!! i dont know how u do it, but it works!! great job, keep it up

AW LAUREN BABE THiS iS AMAZiNG! PLEASE TELL ME THAT THiS iSN`T REALLY HAPPENiNG? SiGN ON SOMETiME SO WE CAN CATCH - UP WiTH EACH OTHER HERE!

i LOVE YOU!

Wow, you seem so much like me. you actually made me cry, this reminds me of a boyfriend i had, named michael, he hurt me really bad, and i know how you feel, i am sorry for your loss. i know it hurts but, if you need someone to talk to, you can e mail me. just comment me back on my page and i will for sure give my e mail to u okay?

Always,
Lauren Michelle

I like this one too wow u r a really great poet don't stop writing poems! 5/5

Hey i thought that was a great poem. it really hit home to me and i can say there was a few tears falling. keep writing :) i plan on reading all your poems xxx