Comments : What Would I Do Without You

  • 14 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wonderful poem. I bet it meant a lot to write this.

    "I'd love my life more than I have in years
    dry my eyes, wipe away all the tears."

    ^^ I really liked those lines. I've been in a relationship like that. Sometimes there are just people who hurt you and you don't realize it until you really get to think about it. Great poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Truely wonderful... Keep writing.