Comments : When Will It End??

  • 17 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Very good poem...to tell you the truth..it can never end, i know i seemed like a happy dude when we were talking earlier...but the truth is im a very depressed guy...and i have been all year...it cant end..because memories stay with you, and the scars never fade....happyness comes on a short leash..and its very hard to keep your grasp on it....and sometimes you can never replace that leash....and your lost....with no one to find you, or in a better way to put it...the ppl who make you how u are dont even care..and the only ppl who do care dont even know because ur so depressed u mask your feelings and hide everthing...so it cant end, but you can add more too it...you can add some happy, but those scars never leave.