I LOVE this poem... u should write some more this good lol i will comment on them too!!!!!!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!

So easy to invision the pictures in my mind as I read your beautiful words. You write with such deep emotion that allows the reader to feel as though these are memories in their mind. loved it.

take care, lis

This is good poems dude keep writing u are good i wish the best for you and write on mine lol

wish the best for you bro

Very nice, Joe... Your words paint a beautiful picture for us.

Aww that's so sweet! loved it!
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This is such a sweet poem!!!!
you are such a good writer!!! Keep on writing so i can keep reading...
Love Always Tiffany Heather Smith