Comments : Distrust and Betrayal

  • 19 years ago

    by elly

    That sad thing is, I relate to this soooo well. I hope everything improves for you... that's all why I never trust anybody in my school. I open up to people that don't pose a threat to me (people that don't associate with people in my school, or anybody I know for that matter)
    But I really liked this even though I didn't rhyme (I'm the type that usually only likes rhymes) so that's a good thing. :) I really do hope things improve for you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadow

    Thanks a lot. ^^ I only write poems when I am angry, sad, or when a good song is on. ^^