OMG.. this poem is soo good!!! any girl would love it!

So beautiful........breahttaking, one of yuor best eric, and the last stanza is my favorite. just beautiful in such a sad loving way.

This poem is sweet. the last 4 lines really get to me." dying without you would be worse than death itself " i love that line! keep up your righting!

This poem is really good i liked it alot 5/5

This poem is really good i liked it alot 5/5

Wow. awesome!! 100/5
i agree, any girl would love to hear this. keep up the awesome work!!!!
~maggie

Dude poems like this are the reason that we read and enjoy poetry

This poem is birlliant i love it! i woudl have gave you 10/5 but i cant so 5/5 will have to do