Very twisted and interesting write. I think more punctuation through your poem could enhance your meaning. keep writing.

Wooow.. how evil! :P awesum poem, but soo darK! lol.. keep it uup!
jessy

Really dark poem, but i like it ...love the flow. keep them coming.

take care, lis

Dark and powerful. The style really works here and conveys the depth of the piece beautifully. Amazing language, 5/5 x

Nice Job...not the same dark poetry i usally read...it was freash and diffrent...diffrent syle...nice Job..
Emma 5/5

I loved it, it flowed soooo nicely , its was wonderfully written, your an amazing poet.. another 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I liked the flow of this immensely, and the last 2 lines absolute pleasure..great poem. Timothy r

This is good

Wow.
you speak to me
5/5
very strong words you deserve many a 5
and youve gotten it!
~Emah

Really mega creepy coz i swear that means you r just bout to die!! but liked it!

Liked but thought it was incredibly intense!! SOZ if u take that as an insult!

That was really good and I can't wait to read more. 5/5, Kate

I liked it, it says something...It means something. Love the darkness of it and everything, I hope to write something as good as this oneday.
Cosmicstar(aka Talia)