I will give my honest opinion. I love the way you write. With such hope and life is a dream. you can write, that much is true, but life is not always strwberrys and chocolate. Not trying to get you down, but love is a lasting thing. But it all depends on the guy or girl. That is how I sorta felt (Not like a girl feels about a guy but opposit, what a guy feels for a girl) She loved me with all her heart, then family moved in and spred us apart. Even if you love eachother. other things will try to get in the way. My saying to you is from one of my poems, "Stay Strong" I gave you a 5/5