You have a very clear imaginative mind and it gave a delightful read. However, your meter was very distracting and did not add to the good words of the poem. Keep writing never the less, you are talented with words.

A-m-a-z-i-n-g!!!!!!!!! this is one of the best poems ive read in a long time... gonna check out some of ur other work now....
take care...

Thanks for the praise and advice.

Wow that was awesome it's almost as if i know the satanic angel. it is very vivid and beautiful.

Great peice well written

That was really good i loved it really keep it comeing

That poem was very mystical. I liked it, it was unusual, nobody really writes like that. Five thumbs up lol. Cheers,

I was intrigued by it greatly but I think some rhyme was a bit forced through it and I lost my self init.
It had excellent words though.
~Emah