Beautifully dark poetry, I like it, the way you used nature & stuff.

This was really good. I really liked the way you worded it. The flow was good and the rhyming was alright. I'd love to read one about winter, A part two. Tehe. Very nice poem though. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Great job... you are so talented...

Interesting, I didn't think you'd pull a different point of view narration, but you ended up taking the view of an old person in reflection of their past. I suppose that i'd rather die during the beautiful death of the leaves instead of the completed death of winter though...

Wow this one really paints a picture. lovd it 5/5

I didn't quite understand the plot or story of the poem... but the wording was good and it flowed well so well done.
- Polly x

Awh, that was sad. But lovely at the same time. I liked how it ended, that made it even abit more sad. But I loved it. Very well written.