That is really good...i can REALLY relate to this poem!!! GREAT job i loved it!

This is really gud i like the choice of words it's really nice ur a gr8 poet x

I really like it i will give u 5/5 and keep up the good work

Amanda*

Awww so sweet
amazing too
had so much nice words init
i loved that hunnie
xoxroxyxox

Again its more fo a story..wheres the imagery..i def lie kur sty;le thou its diff. keep it up.

Lissa

Cute but sad that u did that to her

shame on u

it hurts bad to b cheated on

stay true to her

buy her something nice just bc u love her
show her u care about her!!!!!!! and no one else

Your words show that you regret the wrongs that you have done,but we learn as we grow. It's a part of life.

On the technical side...Try editing and put this in stanza form ending each line with the rhyming word.I think you will like the difference. we all tweak our poems to improve our work.You have the heart of a beautiful poet!