Hey, this is really good...i can relate to it in a couple different ways, i like the way you worded everything, it flows well..keep it up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

You certainly have present rain in a beautiful way. i love thunderstorms and rain, most of the time i just have to get over the fact that it makes my hair go poof. this is a very well done poem

~Jacklyn

Good description of rain drop.
drop drop..... make a ocean.
drop drop...... make a river.
drop drop......make a pond.
drop drop..... quench our thirst

5/5

I really love this poem. The rhyming and flow was excellent and it was so inspirational. Wonderful job!