Hiyu Lisa! ..... This is a great peice of writing Hun!! looking forward to your next poem!

All the best
Dave.x

Oh Lise, I love your words so much, I have missed our writing so much, thank you for sharing your beautiful heart with us. Love, T

Hmm, this poem was well done. There isn't much to change. I don't really see any flaws with it, but I always believed poetry comes from the person who wrote it, and is intended only for the person who wrote it, to understand it. So I don't really believe in other people judging poetry. Anyways, it might not make sense what I'm saying, it did in my head, but yeah good job :P

Wow!!! This poem is amazing!! I loved it!! You are an amazing writer!! Keep it up!!! I wouldn change a thing about this piece!! 5/5!!