WOW, this is an amazing poem, there is so much feeling it! GOOD JOB you have great talent! Will definitly read more 5/5

Oh my...this is beyond words. You have written of a love that is so rare, I don't even know where to start. Beautiful flow and just remarkable passion conveyed through each line of this poetic masterpiece.
I adore these lines:

"From long ago when we were young.
the breath of fifty years of "I love you"

"They comfort me as I trace
The initials of your love in the
Soft bark of my heart."

Well done! Take care and keep it up~Holly

Tom, my daughter told me to check this one out. Absolutely awesome. Will gladly read more of your posts. Thanks.

Wow! I feel like I am living your poem at this very moment. The tears are flowing. This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Sad yet beautiful, the love that lasts through out time. Priceless. This has to be my favorite. You have a masterpiece with this. Bravo!!!!!!!!

Wow! I feel like I am living your poem at this very moment. The tears are flowing. This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Sad yet beautiful, the love that lasts through out time. Priceless. This has to be my favorite. You have a masterpiece with this. Bravo!!!!!!!!

So many wonderful images here. Your love poems are gorgeous

" The sweet salt of my tears refresh me as
They start their long journey
To find the sea of your heart...."

what a wonderful words !!! but what a wonderful feelings !!!

a great poem , Tom !congratulations , my dear friend !

i ll ever come back to read you ...I wish u a nice life and very good luck !
thanks for your comments ...

Best regards ,

Mariana

5/5

I couldn't help but to comment on this...
its a divine poem,,,,every word is sacred and portrayes a world of unspoken word. each word seems to speak and share their story....
its the best poem i have ever read...
loved it...