Comments : Buried

  • 16 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    =(.. Your such a good poet.. I lovvvveee you.. Lol your gonna open these comments and think it's from someone important and it's not gonna be.. It's gonna be plain Malloryyyyy.. Lol I love your poem.. All of them=) I love you byes

    ~Mallory~

  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Hey Jess...not bad..sad but good which is ok with me..love this and hope you write more...

    matt

  • 16 years ago

    by Rolo

    Wow, strong poem. Very heart-wrenching...and your choice of words are absolutely perfect throughout. It really gave you a sense of just what mood you were trying to portray. Very nice, Jess. I always thought you were a wonderful poet. I stand by that thought 100% because it is now an obvious fact.

    Take care, k??

  • 15 years ago

    by Neha

    Sad poem, but great!
    The words flowed perfectly.
    Great job Apple=)
    5/5..
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