If love is a fairy tale. Their should be no happy ending. the love of the fairtale should keep going. I'm the kind of guy that likes fairytales. I even studie them. My favorite's are the ones the grimm brothers collected. People think they just wrote the tales, but all they did was gather and translated.
Sorry to get off the point. You poem was awsom and it was really good. Fairy tails are one of the bases for poetry. They all have a style to it. Keep up the good work. Your Friend-Aaron

This was a wonderful poem i read it several times. keep up the good work much luv lynne