Hey What i meant in the chat room was that u have to write alot of poems thqat arent rele crappy. lol. like to get the first poem award u have to write 30 poems with a rating of like 4.3 or higher.. your poems dont suck i really like this one. in fact i really love it. its well written(exept the weird letter things) and i love the format u used..

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xLaurenx

One Suggestion- Break up the lines into stanzas its kinda hard to read this way.

But u really should remove the excess tuff from the bottom.. its kinda plagairism.... b/c u didnt write it.
:)

But u really should remove the excess tuff from the bottom.. its kinda plagairism.... b/c u didnt write it.
:)