I think ts ok tell me what all of you think

Your poems really good. great choice of words. pretty impressive for ur first love poem. keep it up
dee

That is a great poem great use of words and i like it and it is hard for me to like love poems....5/5

I like this poem it reminds me so much of me and my girlfriend

I love this poem. Great work. 5/5 Keep on wirting
xoxoxox
Jess

This poem reminds me of me and my boyfriend

great work

Kazza