Deep and dark poem,full of hurt,pain and emotion had me hanging on every word, well writen much luv lynne

Omg.. that was different it was awesome

Wow! This is such a great poem! Very deep! So much emotian included in it. Keep it up! xx

Soo deep, i love it

I really liked the darkness created in this poem. It didn't flow as well as it could have done, some lines just had too many syllables in them in comparison to others which affected the flowing of the poem. The words used were good though and the emotion created was very well done. =]

Awesome Poem. The darkness and the sadness within this poem was great. The flow and the structure was very well. Great job.

Peace, Joe

This poem is really good!!! keep up the good work!

Omg i love your poems! like it expreses what you feel and it gets to me at the sme time lol i ni how you feel as im goin through mostly the sme fings. u jus gota member to be strong n that theres ppl hu care bou u........... such as me lol
love ya x0x0

I think I liked this the very least of all the peices I have seen thus far. It seemed to have come from a person that just wanted to be the victim in everything and instead of taking resposiblities for thier actions they blamed it on others well thats what I thought Plot121

I liked the plot of the poem it was really dark and I will have to agree with HiddenxSoul because the flow wasn't that perfect maybe some commas, better spelling, and correction of words that were misspelled would've helped but that's just me either way I loved the poem and it's a tragedy that people do this to other people 5/5

-Mori