I really like this one probably because i can relate to it too lol

Awe thats wonderful i wish mine were that good...

sometime it would mean a lot if you read/commented on mine? =)
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Victoria

Aww. it's so good. very very good. i loved it. keep up the good work.xoxo

This one is so beautiul! Each stanza & each line is so powerful and full of emotions... What a wonderful poem!

This was a wonderful poem!!!!
it reallt touches you and you feel somthing insaide when this poem is read
wonderful
yes i agree renee a perfect piece

keep up the great work

Lana