Another great poem Dave my favourite part was
"Look for poppy fields, find fields of string!
I see my Aura, in poisoned winds!
I find myself in a dream, but it`s real!
And you were there, but you were surreal!"

Such a way with words you have...I love it.

Take care, lise

Thanks Lisa! ... you`re a diamond, taking the time to read all my stuff!

Dave.x

David, I loved this line...
"Sit and watch, your shadow cries"
This is a great poem, welcome to my afvorites list, you are truly an extraordinary talent, thanx for sharing. Tim

Thanks Tim! ... everybody is being so kind on here! .... wished i`d known about this site sooner!

All the best
Dave.

Thanks Tim! ... everybody is being so kind on here! .... wished i`d known about this site sooner!

All the best
Dave.

Wow...=)...wonderful poem! keep up the good work, i enjoy reading it. loved it

Thanks Morgan! x