Wow this is amazing has so much feelings inside lol
but im not to sure swearing is a lowed oh well who cares 6/5 lol
thats wiked
xoxroxyxox

The realness here fo ur heart is amamzing and captivates the reader...wow love it best so far.

Lissa

A beautiful love letter. I like the way you shoot from the hip and write with your heart.

Loving your style without a doubt G...With a passion we all can relate to...God bless.

I think i like this one the best. wow, it's not everyday u can find a guy who can write like this. like i said b4, it's very unique. this poem makes me happy in a sad kind of way (if that makes any sense)oxox keep writing!

Wow, this is very sweet, shes a lucky girl to have you =] keep it up!

This is an excellent poem i really loved it :D

This poem is so adorable

Wow...you are in love and i think it is adorable and this gurl that your with has a really good man and your both lucky to have eachother.....loved it
5/5
Fabulous Job!!!

I actually have to smile,your language is so familiar to me.(because of my job) this is great.It sounds like you are really in love with this girl.You put your heart out there in your poems,which makes a good poet.keep it up!

You got a rel unique style of writing.. I liked this poem...it's really niice, and it shows your true emotions it .. good job..

avii*-