A strong message in this peice wich is well expressed. the flow is a little rough in areas and the structure isn't perfect but it defantly gets your point across well with some well written content.

Wooww.. this had an extremely strong message and it was so true! keep up the amazing work! 5/5

My dads military so ive lived the life. love it, and im glad your aware and appreciative. thanks, good work

You do. and tis a good point indeed. I agree. Good message and even with the spacing not being perfect it still flowed fairly well. so good poem. =)

Morgan --
Unfortunately, I had to dock this poem quite a bit. The force was absolutely terrible ;; as was the rhyming. You DEFINITELY have some work to do on this. And again with the capital 'I'`s. I guess you made your point, but, if you want people to take you seriously -- you`re going to have to do better than this. 3/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood