Awww! datz so sweet! very good write! i love it! :)
jessy

I liked it because it was sweet and loving and emotional, it didnt rhyme much, but that didnt matter because i was so lost in the poem i didnt need it to rhyme, and poems that dont rhyme can be good, as this one was awesome.
xxxx

You might want to go into more detail to make your poem come alive and also maybe edit out that site error. It felt more like a narrative but it's good none-the-less.